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PostSubject: [Lightning Arrow] Erased (03-April-2016)   [Lightning Arrow] Erased (03-April-2016) Icon_minitimeWed Apr 20, 2016 6:50 pm

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Production: ENP
Editor/s : Lightning Arrow
*Anime Used: Dimension W
*Song/Artist: Erase You/ Richy nix
Description: My new (kinda) amv i thought of sharing here :P
China man is out, piece!

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As I (and others) always tend to tell you, you really need to tone it down a lot with your usage of overlays.
Now aside from that, your work is good, masks, camera, and most of the techniques you apply are high level, but also like a lot of your works, it starts with me asking what am I watching, and ends with me asking what did I just watch.
Translation: It is very random, and you need to have better structure.

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Pls stop using so much overlays or at least get non pixelated ones lol and you should look into the video structure more like gab said
Overall decent standard action with some bad and some cool moments.
Looking forward to your next video ;)

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tenks guys <3

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