Subject: [iHaki-kun] Last Time (31-03-2015) Thu Apr 02, 2015 12:01 am
Video: Production: EliteNakamaStudio Editor/s :iHaki-kun *Anime Used: Parasyte *Song/Artist: No Resolve - Last Time Contest Participating/ed: Audition Elinnes Nakama Production Description: I made this amv to show u guys my current skill. I would love some construcive feedback
Changelling
Posts : 2430 Join date : 2013-01-09 Age : 27 Location : Hamburg
Subject: Re: [iHaki-kun] Last Time (31-03-2015) Sat Apr 04, 2015 11:36 pm
Ian [iHaki-kun] wrote:
Production: EliteNakamaStudio
Almost read Ellines nakama studio. Cant even blame me Lol.
Anyway I guess I don't have much to add other than what has been said on the audition thread. But yea, the action bits were not to my liking because everything was too chaotic and needed to be more organized.
Pieetrr
Posts : 2392 Join date : 2012-07-25 Location : Greece
Subject: Re: [iHaki-kun] Last Time (31-03-2015) Sun Apr 05, 2015 12:37 am
Okay,i think you have potential as an editor but you are just inexperienced,below i've written almost everything i would look into improving if i were you.
Feedback:
Your blackscreens are a bit over the limit of so i would try tonning them down next time,your panning is a bit rough(try not to shake the camera too much onto many directions because it causes the viewer to focus and loses you points),your slides need work as in they are too slow and ineffective at what they are supposed to achieve.
Your masks are akward in that you use panning to transition through them but in the end they just disappear and the next scene comes,i think you might want to rethink this technique.Your eye transition in 1:56 seemed out of place to me because i could see the hole in his eye,i dont really know if that was on purpose or a technical error.The end is slow compared to the previous action parts and generally some random static/slow scenes in between zooms,rough panning or during the crossfading/fading only took away from the amv.
potatotaco
Posts : 297 Join date : 2013-11-18 Age : 27 Location : oui?
Subject: Re: [iHaki-kun] Last Time (31-03-2015) Mon Apr 06, 2015 2:41 pm
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