STK C/P
shatter effect seems odd at 0:13 cause there is still fragment on the screen before the effect finished abruptly. use physics to make them dissapear or a zoom next time.
0:21 actually i don't think it's a good idea to have the anime subs unless you have a reason (story explanation, but it still can be hard to master, i know, i failed it on my BC entry , or trailer). but at least, if you do it, slightly reduce the song volume, cause it melts in a bad way.
0:36 as always you tend to make drastic changes of color environnments with your cuts. at least, make a fade or something to pace this abrupt change of light.
0:53 like MDL said, TOO LONG.
1:28 dat glitch on YT :o
1:29 you reused the scene from the mask earlier in the hospital (that i didn't liked much in term on body dimension). some flashback COULD have been decent, but it's a quick cut. reconsider this when you reuse scenes.
2:04 long scenes before didn't make it extremely interesting, but the cut through the boy make it worst. people tend to like to see the action, so if the anime don't have the impact of the car, at least go quick to the hospital scenes, not a huge plan for the quy.
otherwise, the verse moment of the hospital felt a bit lacking of intensity for the impact of the song.
at the reduced intensity mode (silver crow costume), it have a decent atmosphere but the scenes when he goes back in the air lacks a lot of beat sync. it looks like one big scene.
end sequence of the photo: if you want to stop the movement, make it with decelleration, not a constant speed and then a rash cut of movement. or keep it all time long and make the video fade to black.
Like the others said: huge lack of impact, a song cut and shorter tracks would have been definitely better. But it was an honest attempt, and know i heard about a new editor i didn't knew as Melanie.
Nota bene: if you want to try the level up, consider seriously to check your scene lights/environnement, cause the cuts really make us out of your clips most of the time.
Je suis Alberto.
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Subject: MrDrunkenPony&MelanieMurderous-Virtualove 
Sun Aug 18, 2013 12:12 am
