Posts : 1354 Join date : 2012-03-12 Age : 32 Location : England
Subject: [Crookz] Shingeki no Kyojin AMV ~ Fear Avenged Sat Nov 23, 2013 1:42 am
another year, another dropped akross attempt. reason: cuz I hated editing it, I should of finished it when I was hyped about it, but I was lazy. scenes near the end are almost cut & paste. but I hope you guys enjoy the latter.
DL: https://www.mediafire.com/?wd188gdov1f72xe
Kisagi
Posts : 76 Join date : 2013-11-22 Location : United States, California
Subject: Re: [Crookz] Shingeki no Kyojin AMV ~ Fear Avenged Sat Nov 23, 2013 3:58 am
hmm... Not too bad, though I didn't like some of the overlays you used; It felt as if they were put in the wrong place.
Also it feels that it was missing something, which a lot of action amvs are missing now a days, which became boring after a few seconds.
Keep it up!
Crookz
Posts : 1354 Join date : 2012-03-12 Age : 32 Location : England
Subject: Re: [Crookz] Shingeki no Kyojin AMV ~ Fear Avenged Sat Nov 23, 2013 9:41 am
Kisagi wrote:
hmm... Not too bad, though I didn't like some of the overlays you used; It felt as if they were put in the wrong place.
Also it feels that it was missing something, which a lot of action amvs are missing now a days, which became boring after a few seconds.
Keep it up!
u no like random overlay action style no jutsu no honestly thanks, glad u took the time
Kisagi
Posts : 76 Join date : 2013-11-22 Location : United States, California
Subject: Re: [Crookz] Shingeki no Kyojin AMV ~ Fear Avenged Sat Nov 23, 2013 10:03 am
Not that, just the placement timing felt odd
Changelling
Posts : 2430 Join date : 2013-01-09 Age : 27 Location : Hamburg
Subject: Re: [Crookz] Shingeki no Kyojin AMV ~ Fear Avenged Sat Nov 23, 2013 11:05 am
I like it so incredibly much *^* as I said in Skype the very last scene could have bee something else that shows an actual conclusion of the video. but otherwise you showed incredible skills and potential. Respect mate!
Pieetrr
Posts : 2392 Join date : 2012-07-25 Location : Greece
Subject: Re: [Crookz] Shingeki no Kyojin AMV ~ Fear Avenged Sat Nov 23, 2013 3:30 pm
My Opinion on your Beta:
Pieetrr wrote:
Above all i don't want to discourage anyone so take note that i give feedback to someone to continue his project,not quit it.If you quit it it will be a waste of your and my time both.
I can see what you did in 0:26 but i think it's a waste of a strong beat and not as impactful as it should be,maybe you could time it better at least. 0:44 mikasa's foot transitions to mikasa slinging,randomly,not a fan of it.I know 0:08 has been a pain in your ass but it's still not overwhelming enough imo,an overwhelming fire can't just slide in.
I know your policy about unique styles and so on and,of course,you can do whatever you want but what i would recommend is use effects to bring out more impact to your zoom outs/transitions/strong beats.Also,a personal preference that i would do,is use better scenes or make them better,some scenes are really mediocre and static.
Same thing as in your beta testing,you didn't change anything i could notice,still a good piece from you.
Crookz
Posts : 1354 Join date : 2012-03-12 Age : 32 Location : England
Subject: Re: [Crookz] Shingeki no Kyojin AMV ~ Fear Avenged Sat Nov 23, 2013 3:40 pm
Its funny but I'm that sick of looking at this amv that I really don't like it, the majority that is, but mehhh. this is called learning, plus its nice to see some activity on my channel (what little their is).
ZoroIttoryu
Posts : 768 Join date : 2013-07-02 Age : 27 Location : Greece
Subject: Re: [Crookz] Shingeki no Kyojin AMV ~ Fear Avenged Sat Nov 23, 2013 3:44 pm
I enjoyed it Tom, loved the masking but i think the video missed something to make it epic, not sure what though.
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