Posts : 254 Join date : 2013-05-09 Age : 26 Location : Australia
Subject: [AlchemistEskimo] Boom Goes the City Sat Jan 04, 2014 1:54 pm
Author: AlchemistEskimo Production: Ellines Nakama Anime source(s):Durarara, Eden of the East, Fate Zero, Kara No Kyoukai, Darker Than Black Audio Source: From the Ground - Hollywood Undead Contest Participated In: Eria Teams IC (Enigma Time 2nd Edition) Description: Well this was made for Eria teams 3 day Ic and I made this with the help of a dozen cups of coffee and no common sense. I decided to refine my "crossover" skills and use this concept for an Ic since it's pretty meh. The general idea is we have our drr cops chasing after a terroist who is attempting to blow up the city (note the title).
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Changelling
Posts : 2430 Join date : 2013-01-09 Age : 27 Location : Hamburg
Subject: Re: [AlchemistEskimo] Boom Goes the City Sat Jan 04, 2014 2:13 pm
Demmet my mod powers don't work here to fix the link. But yea you probably already know that I love this so much xD Really a good job man
Crookz
Posts : 1354 Join date : 2012-03-12 Age : 31 Location : England
Subject: Re: [AlchemistEskimo] Boom Goes the City Sat Jan 04, 2014 2:17 pm
the start of the up tempo is nice, gets me going. the crossover is amazing, especially for 3 days, how the fuck u mask so fast u freak :3 and the other anime u chose almost looks as though its the same animation as DRRR so nice choice their.
only part I felt out of place was the fighting, but I could understand where u could place it in the story. other than that I loved it, great job dave, your another thats getting good in enp fast. congrats.
ZoroIttoryu
Posts : 768 Join date : 2013-07-02 Age : 26 Location : Greece
Subject: Re: [AlchemistEskimo] Boom Goes the City Sat Jan 04, 2014 6:25 pm
Dave doing big stuff again *^*. Well done my friend :D
Pieetrr
Posts : 2392 Join date : 2012-07-25 Location : Greece
Subject: Re: [AlchemistEskimo] Boom Goes the City Sun Jan 05, 2014 9:51 am
Just don't like your transitions,more like,a certain way you are transitioning.A hand pops out of nowhere and brings a scene with it.Really takes away from the flow for me.You need to figure out how to bring that hand in the scene in order for it to bring the other scene with it.
AlchemistEskimo
Posts : 254 Join date : 2013-05-09 Age : 26 Location : Australia
Subject: Re: [AlchemistEskimo] Boom Goes the City Mon Jan 06, 2014 3:28 pm
995Gabber wrote:
Demmet my mod powers don't work here to fix the link. But yea you probably already know that I love this so much xD Really a good job man
Yeah i'll fix it since I forgot to use the yt forum thing. Anyway thanks a lot :)
Crookz wrote:
the start of the up tempo is nice, gets me going. the crossover is amazing, especially for 3 days, how the fuck u mask so fast u freak :3 and the other anime u chose almost looks as though its the same animation as DRRR so nice choice their.
only part I felt out of place was the fighting, but I could understand where u could place it in the story. other than that I loved it, great job dave, your another thats getting good in enp fast. congrats.
Thanks a lot dude! The fighting was pretty much me just running out of "plot" so it was a pretty dodgy add on ahaha.
xBerserkDrew wrote:
Dave doing big stuff again *^*. Well done my friend :D
Thanks Andrew!
Pieetrr wrote:
Just don't like your transitions,more like,a certain way you are transitioning.A hand pops out of nowhere and brings a scene with it.Really takes away from the flow for me.You need to figure out how to bring that hand in the scene in order for it to bring the other scene with it.
Yeah I see what you're getting at. Being picky with scenes wasn't really wasn't an option because of the 3 day edit time and the story but I'll put more effort into that in future! Thanks for the advice!
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