Very talented fella here. Hey man I quite liked this video! Very pretty and emotional, I like the amount of energy you threw in it, so it didn't suffer from being lazy or something.
Now what I suggest you do in places like 1:03 would be making better use of the pan/crop tool. Instead of just lowering the opacity of the clip and placing it above the other one, you can make zoom in on the 1st frame of the clip, and zoom out afterwards (you can also shake the camera during the zoom, will look pretty).
But yea this was very pretty :) Loved your vid man!