Posts : 2430 Join date : 2013-01-09 Age : 27 Location : Hamburg
Subject: [995Gabber] Si(G)Ns of an Angel (18/8/2014) Tue Aug 19, 2014 4:47 am
I don't have a poster so i'll use this instead
Hallo my friends! Allow me to present my recent IC to you all. I'm quite happy with it really. Never done a 3minute+ video for an IC before, and never really done a dramatic video too so this vid has more than 1 of my firsts.
The story evolves around an angel that is in love with a human girl (Re-l), and being connected to a person from the human realm is absolutely forbidden for angels. At an early stage that is only presented as a flashback here, he appears to Re-l in his angel form, and she is terrified by his appearance to an extent that she vows to hunt this being down. In the meantime the angel possesses the body of Vincent Law, a man who Re-l is in love with, but is forced to take into custody for being accused of murder.
Event that follow this stage. Not really the main focus of the story:
In an attempt of escape from Vincent's side he is actually caught and banished from the higher grounds that he used to live in. Re-l follows him down to slums just to see it being attacked by bandits, and Vincent about to fall from a cliff. She rushes to his aid, holds his hand but the fall is inevitable. Vincent falls but due to the angel within him he wakes up unharmed, but Re-l's mental state forces her into a coma. Both Vincent and the angel weep for Re-l, but she stands up again and Vincent and her go back to the higher grounds where they are both sentenced to a life time in jail. at this stage the angel sees Re-l with him in a poor state, and while taking a look at Vincent's memories he goes berserk, destroying the entire prison as well an angel sent from heaven to exterminate him.
The soul of Vincent Law struggles the possession of the angel, but its futile, the angel fully takes over, and Vincent's soul dies which causes Vincent's body to fully perish as well, and the angel appears in his true form in front of his love Re-l who recognizes him on an instant and tries to kill him when she misses and kills his enemy instead. At this stage Re-l attacks the angel head on, who on the other hand does not want to harm her, but with eyes full of tears he turns around and chooses to fight back when he realizes she will not back down, ending up in accidently killing her. Once she died the angel goes to the heavens to ask for her life back, but he is sentenced to eternal doom in hell. However, the angel does not stop there. He kills the guardian of the gates which causes them to open, and Re-l emerges out of it as a white angel. This reunion does not last long though. The angel's sentence still stands. He says his goodbyes and falls down to hell. Re-l is saddened but knows there is nothing she can do, and flies up to heaven.
Note, everything I mentioned here actually has a scene or even a sequence in this video that reflects it. So I hope I am not accused of making it up just now.
Production: Ellines Nakama Author: 995Gabber Anime: Ergo Proxy Artist: Theory of a deadman Song: Angel Contest participated in: Stylize 6th Impact
The story revolves around a kind of forced relationship between Vincent and Re-l. Aaaand you better figure the rest out on your own Hehe~ Yes there definitely is more to it than just that. So Enjoy! If you want I mean... not like I can tell you what to do or anything...
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potatotaco
Posts : 297 Join date : 2013-11-18 Age : 27 Location : oui?
Subject: Re: [995Gabber] Si(G)Ns of an Angel (18/8/2014) Tue Aug 19, 2014 4:23 pm
Well i have to say it felt kinda linear all the way through, i was just waiting for a moment where u will pull out some new technique or something to add up a bit in the amv... but it was pretty clean and u were focusing on the story so it balanced out, since the story was pretty clear. Tho i gotta say scene selection and sync were superb. You're going in the right direction on developing your style.
[key]Scarlet
Posts : 65 Join date : 2014-02-06 Age : 32
Subject: Re: [995Gabber] Si(G)Ns of an Angel (18/8/2014) Tue Aug 19, 2014 11:15 pm
Well I pretty much agree with RealShinteki, so I'm just going to say good luck!
kenshiroAMV
Posts : 82 Join date : 2013-05-27 Age : 30 Location : narnia
Subject: Re: [995Gabber] Si(G)Ns of an Angel (18/8/2014) Wed Aug 20, 2014 12:18 am
gg . . . . .
k have a real thing lol :
i agree with wot most of ivan said tho id say tht the story could have been made clearer. i mean i get there is a romance between the girl and shes an angel or somethin? probs could have used some scenes showin clear intimate contact such as kissin or shit like tht. thoo lets not go into the bs romance sector too hard lol.
other than the story aspect. editin could have been better as it didnt really show ur advance or anythin new. overlays were not excessively used tho i noticed it more than i should have. there were some moments tht jump cutted tht felt off such as 21/22 secs. i guess crossfade it or just dont have cuts like tht lol. movement was on da whole nice but get on davje's lvl sahn! blur sometimes felt a bit unnecessary so maybe tone it down for the next vid. it wasnt really the ammount of blur but how much u used it.
Changelling
Posts : 2430 Join date : 2013-01-09 Age : 27 Location : Hamburg
Subject: Re: [995Gabber] Si(G)Ns of an Angel (18/8/2014) Wed Aug 20, 2014 12:50 am
RealShinteki wrote:
Well i have to say it felt kinda linear all the way through, i was just waiting for a moment where u will pull out some new technique or something to add up a bit in the amv... but it was pretty clean and u were focusing on the story so it balanced out, since the story was pretty clear. Tho i gotta say scene selection and sync were superb. You're going in the right direction on developing your style.
Yesh I understand the editing was almost neglected here. Can't really focus on thaaaaaaat many things in an IC lol. Much thanks tho I appreciate your feedback. Have a gg.
[key]Scarlet wrote:
Well I pretty much agree with RealShinteki, so I'm just going to say good luck!
Hallo there Pam~ Thanks a lot :D
Kenshiro wrote:
i agree with wot most of ivan said tho id say tht the story could have been made clearer. i mean i get there is a romance between the girl and shes an angel or somethin? probs could have used some scenes showin clear intimate contact such as kissin or shit like tht. thoo lets not go into the bs romance sector too hard lol.
other than the story aspect. editin could have been better as it didnt really show ur advance or anythin new. overlays were not excessively used tho i noticed it more than i should have. there were some moments tht jump cutted tht felt off such as 21/22 secs. i guess crossfade it or just dont have cuts like tht lol. movement was on da whole nice but get on davje's lvl sahn! blur sometimes felt a bit unnecessary so maybe tone it down for the next vid. it wasnt really the ammount of blur but how much u used it.
Personally I don't think I could have made it any clearer than this LOL (and you still got it somewhat wrong so goddamn it son). Did you really just demand a kissing scene? yea right so you could bust nuts over it and then use that scene to laugh at me for the next 4 years. Get real, not gonna happen lol. Anything you say about the technical aspect I automatically agree. Didn't have much mental preparation and time to give it the thoughts it deserves. Thanks for the feedback Jas I appreciate it a lot! PS: I'm having my doubt about you being an English man.
Okay guys I will update the thread with a spoiler tag that reveals the true story just in case Jas is not actually a retard and it really was hard to get. get rekt jas. I mean I love you
Pieetrr
Posts : 2392 Join date : 2012-07-25 Location : Greece
Subject: Re: [995Gabber] Si(G)Ns of an Angel (18/8/2014) Wed Aug 20, 2014 1:07 pm
My eyes turned red from the blurs
RealShinteki wrote:
Well i have to say it felt kinda linear all the way through, i was just waiting for a moment where u will pull out some new technique or something to add up a bit in the amv... but it was pretty clean and u were focusing on the story so it balanced out, since the story was pretty clear. Tho i gotta say scene selection and sync were superb. You're going in the right direction on developing your style.
[key]Scarlet wrote:
Well I pretty much agree with RealShinteki, so I'm just going to say good luck!
Changelling
Posts : 2430 Join date : 2013-01-09 Age : 27 Location : Hamburg
Subject: Re: [995Gabber] Si(G)Ns of an Angel (18/8/2014) Wed Aug 20, 2014 2:31 pm
Pieetrr wrote:
My eyes turned red
well then its not gonna be a rek when I say........... . .
You need to have your eyes checked
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Pieetrr
Posts : 2392 Join date : 2012-07-25 Location : Greece
Subject: Re: [995Gabber] Si(G)Ns of an Angel (18/8/2014) Wed Aug 20, 2014 2:45 pm
Army doc said my eyes were 10/10 so you better check your blur settings.
ZoroIttoryu
Posts : 768 Join date : 2013-07-02 Age : 26 Location : Greece
Subject: Re: [995Gabber] Si(G)Ns of an Angel (18/8/2014) Thu Aug 21, 2014 2:18 pm
It was a pretty enjoyable video for me, like all your recent works. I pretty much agree with everyone above :P PS: You saw what Irany told you in the Eden Team forum, you didn't listen to uncle Andrew when he said, make a shorter video xD I know all the french ways you should have trusted me :P (jk ofc, i know you wanted to represent a story and that's why you made it long xD)
Changelling
Posts : 2430 Join date : 2013-01-09 Age : 27 Location : Hamburg
Subject: Re: [995Gabber] Si(G)Ns of an Angel (18/8/2014) Thu Aug 21, 2014 2:58 pm
ZoroIttoryu wrote:
It was a pretty enjoyable video for me, like all your recent works.
Yo glad you enjoyed it andy!
ZoroIttoryu wrote:
PS: You saw what Irany told you in the Eden Team forum, you didn't listen to uncle Andrew when he said, make a shorter video xD I know all the french ways you should have trusted me :P
Not sure what to do with this part. Its not just about the story. I think I'm free to have my video of any duration that I want, and personally I see it as an act of disrespect towards the song artist when I cut their works like that. They've thrown more effort on their songs than I will ever throw on an AMV.
ZoroIttoryu
Posts : 768 Join date : 2013-07-02 Age : 26 Location : Greece
Subject: Re: [995Gabber] Si(G)Ns of an Angel (18/8/2014) Thu Aug 21, 2014 3:20 pm
995Gabber wrote:
ZoroIttoryu wrote:
It was a pretty enjoyable video for me, like all your recent works.
Yo glad you enjoyed it andy!
ZoroIttoryu wrote:
PS: You saw what Irany told you in the Eden Team forum, you didn't listen to uncle Andrew when he said, make a shorter video xD I know all the french ways you should have trusted me :P
Not sure what to do with this part. Its not just about the story. I think I'm free to have my video of any duration that I want, and personally I see it as an act of disrespect towards the song artist when I cut their works like that. They've thrown more effort on their songs than I will ever throw on an AMV.
What part of jk didn't you understand lol xD You do what you like xD
AlchemistEskimo
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Subject: Re: [995Gabber] Si(G)Ns of an Angel (18/8/2014) Mon Aug 25, 2014 4:07 pm
Kinda like if if tried eating my own arm at gun point. Not bad
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