Time for one of these good old fashioned Gabber responses.
Everyone is clapping and cheering in the background here I go:
Because it is only a couple of days after the last video that we have seen from you, there was not much progression to be expected and seen. However, the longer video did help me assess you better, and I now understand what level you are at so that's a kind of progress, Hurray for the 1st step.
You seem to give timing a lot of thoughts and focus, which is nice. I know TrafalgawLaw7 would be pleased with you if he was still here.
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But scene selection was very weak. I highly suggest that you think a lot about what kind of clips you put together, and always try to make a meaning in your video. Give it a concept, don't just cut random clips and throw them together.
Another tip would be to learn about flow and what it is. Flow is how smoothly your clips are played, to achieve that you will, again, have to think about what clips you put next to each other. They need to be of similar color, animation, and similar motion as well.
O and btw, try to make your outros shorter, because right now its deceiving, and way too long. No one is going to watch the video till the end.
I believe that this is a reasonable level for a new editor, but to avoid having editors stuck in the beginner cage forever; you have to keep in mind that your next video has to be at least double the level of this if not even higher. Keep rising dude.
Subject: what you thing gays !! 
Sat Aug 29, 2015 11:57 pm
