I find it kind of ironic that you'd make a type of vids that's acronym literally has the word "Story" in it, yet the lack of substance and concept is too obvious.
Anyway, I feel the need to commend you on the upbeat action part of the video. You have gotten better at that. But the 1st half of the video with the voices and all that noise was what I wished if it wasn't there. Maybe Dan or Titannia have something to say about that part, but in my book it is a broken style that will add nothing to the video but empty duration.