Hello Devil, thanks for sharing your amv in our forum!
I think the level of your edits is pretty decent for the time you are editing and i really like your song and anime choices, they seem to fit pretty well every time.
2 things i would like to point out are, firstly the color correction in the IC video gets a bit pixelated in some scenes, when you try to make everything else, than red and orange, desaturated and secondly the use of presets for some zooms and pans (if you use presets im just speculating, correct me if im wrong) Its not really that bad to use presets but it has become a bit of a taboo in this part of the community over the years. Im not telling you to not use them just try to study their movement and recreate them on your own. It will help you progress more as an editor.
Anyways, good luck with future projects and good luck in the IC!