Shoto's fire - #Bestmyheroacademiaamv

Posts : 10 Join date : 2014-11-23

Production: me
Editor/s : Azazel
Anime Used: hero academia and some tokyo ghoul action
Song/Artist: celldweller - mother's arms
Contest Participating/ed: Mondocon 2017
Description: dusting out our joints to make a clip with an overused anime
Being a year i didn't edit , give me YOUR feedback about this thing

DDl for quality : http://www109.zippyshare.com/v/hg2sH4EM/file.html

Subject: Re: Shoto's fire - #Bestmyheroacademiaamv Sat Oct 28, 2017 1:32 pm

It wasn't the best Boku no Hero Academia AMV. You lied to me Azazel

Subject: Re: Shoto's fire - #Bestmyheroacademiaamv Sun Oct 29, 2017 9:02 pm

Work on making your edits more cleaner and choose more stylized fonts that are visually better looking or dont use them at all. Also i dont know why you used clips from noragami or one piece etc. They didnt work like you wanted them to and they didnt blend well enough with the rest. I really liked the transition on 0:48, that was a nice one.
Overall i would work on making cleaner edits, as in making transition smoother and effects more visible and polished. Also the song cut wasnt that great, i think it could have been better with a sudden pause and a dramatic slow scene and then proceed to the next song like it did.
Best of luck with your next projects!

Posts : 10 Join date : 2014-11-23

ZoroIttoryu wrote:: Work on making your edits more cleaner and choose more stylized fonts that are visually better looking or dont use them at all. Also i dont know why you used clips from noragami or one piece etc. They didnt work like you wanted them to and they didnt blend well enough with the rest. I really liked the transition on 0:48, that was a nice one.
Overall i would work on making cleaner edits, as in making transition smoother and effects more visible and polished. Also the song cut wasnt that great, i think it could have been better with a sudden pause and a dramatic slow scene and then proceed to the next song like it did.
Best of luck with your next projects!

Super late but i like this kind of feedback , about the noragami and one piece i used them cause the character design is very similar to mha in fact i used 2 more anime ''gurren laggan'' and ''gundam'' maybe you spotted those two because you are familiar with one piece and noragami but i agree about the fonts looking back now they look disgusting .