Shoto's fire - #Bestmyheroacademiaamv

Production: me
Editor/s : Azazel
Anime Used: hero academia and some tokyo ghoul action
Song/Artist: celldweller - mother's arms
Contest Participating/ed: Mondocon 2017
Description: dusting out our joints to make a clip with an overused anime
Being a year i didn't edit , give me YOUR feedback about this thing

DDl for quality : http://www109.zippyshare.com/v/hg2sH4EM/file.html

It wasn't the best Boku no Hero Academia AMV. You lied to me Azazel

Work on making your edits more cleaner and choose more stylized fonts that are visually better looking or dont use them at all. Also i dont know why you used clips from noragami or one piece etc. They didnt work like you wanted them to and they didnt blend well enough with the rest. I really liked the transition on 0:48, that was a nice one.
Overall i would work on making cleaner edits, as in making transition smoother and effects more visible and polished. Also the song cut wasnt that great, i think it could have been better with a sudden pause and a dramatic slow scene and then proceed to the next song like it did.
Best of luck with your next projects!

ZoroIttoryu wrote:

Work on making your edits more cleaner and choose more stylized fonts that are visually better looking or dont use them at all. Also i dont know why you used clips from noragami or one piece etc. They didnt work like you wanted them to and they didnt blend well enough with the rest. I really liked the transition on 0:48, that was a nice one.
Overall i would work on making cleaner edits, as in making transition smoother and effects more visible and polished. Also the song cut wasnt that great, i think it could have been better with a sudden pause and a dramatic slow scene and then proceed to the next song like it did.
Best of luck with your next projects!

Super late but i like this kind of feedback , about the noragami and one piece i used them cause the character design is very similar to mha in fact i used 2 more anime ''gurren laggan'' and ''gundam'' maybe you spotted those two because you are familiar with one piece and noragami but i agree about the fonts looking back now they look disgusting .