Diary Of Jane (Fairy Tail AMV ) | Judge me pls

Hello mates.Here i am again showing you my brand new amv.What i really want from you guys is to tell me what i did wrong and i can do to improve myself at editing.I know its not even a decent try but how i can improve if not making vids.So here is me vid.Be harsh so i can learn :)


http://www.amvnetwork.blogspot.gr/2013/01/fairy-tailamv-diary-of-jane.html

Seems nice...Try to improve your transitions though...even a crossfade is better than a custom transition of vegas...You can download newblue and play with the transitions there...Except from that it seemed really nice to me..The flow wasnt bad and the effects were not overused :D

hmm watch more and more amvs, watch them carefully highlight the parts that you like the most and watch them again and again. Point out WHY you like those parts and then what is done to give that result :) then you will have your answer on what to improve to make your videos seem better to you :)

As for the video, work on your flow and syncing. Every scene should follow the previous one both in "movement" and in what is shown. (at least that's how i work on my videos)

Good try by the way :)