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 [UniqueDazZzle]World So Cold (28.07.2013)

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UniqueDazZzle

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PostSubject: [UniqueDazZzle]World So Cold (28.07.2013)   [UniqueDazZzle]World So Cold (28.07.2013) Icon_minitimeTue Jul 30, 2013 3:25 pm


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Editor: UniqueDazZzle
Anime: Shingeki No Kyojin
Song: 12 Stones - World So Cold
Contest Participated in : Stylize 5th Impact
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This is an AMV made for ET Stylize 5th Impact IC this hands down my best IC AMV ever I guess :P   I have some mistakes but what can you say it's me after all !!  Download Link: http:
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Changelling

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PostSubject: Re: [UniqueDazZzle]World So Cold (28.07.2013)   [UniqueDazZzle]World So Cold (28.07.2013) Icon_minitimeTue Jul 30, 2013 3:44 pm

I think you've improved a little bit, Not sure on what aspect tho. Scene selection and pacing perhaps. However I didn't like it. There was this atmosphere throughout the whole vid that it is lacking. + the black outlines that kept on showing due to your zoom outs, don't do that.
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PostSubject: Re: [UniqueDazZzle]World So Cold (28.07.2013)   [UniqueDazZzle]World So Cold (28.07.2013) Icon_minitimeWed Jul 31, 2013 1:31 am

995Gabber wrote:
I think you've improved a little bit, Not sure on what aspect tho. Scene selection and pacing perhaps. However I didn't like it. There was this atmosphere throughout the whole vid that it is lacking. + the black outlines that kept on showing due to your zoom outs, don't do that.

Thanks Gab, I couldn't fix the black out lines problem except for yesterday :P
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PostSubject: Re: [UniqueDazZzle]World So Cold (28.07.2013)   [UniqueDazZzle]World So Cold (28.07.2013) Icon_minitimeWed Jul 31, 2013 1:55 am

I have to say that this is your best work till now hands down. Clip selection and pacing was perfect up until 1.19...After that some connections did not make sense.

About the typography...Try blending the letters more with the background, either by fading them or using them under the main layer of the clip.(and change the font next time xD)

Also, i think you need to smoothen your transitions and shakes cause most of them seemed kinda rough(like 0.04 with the transition you did with the brightness)

Overall it was a solid work. I enjoyed it a lot!!!
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PostSubject: Re: [UniqueDazZzle]World So Cold (28.07.2013)   [UniqueDazZzle]World So Cold (28.07.2013) Icon_minitimeWed Jul 31, 2013 2:13 am

TheInvisibleBlackxX wrote:
If you ever want me to betatest you just add me on skype...i can help you more there
he charges 1 potion of vanishing cream per beta test. He needs it to stay invisibru. You have your option daz
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PostSubject: Re: [UniqueDazZzle]World So Cold (28.07.2013)   [UniqueDazZzle]World So Cold (28.07.2013) Icon_minitimeWed Jul 31, 2013 8:31 am

quite nice i guess you are improving but in such songs song cut looks ugly
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