Better than what I usually see from you (your part I mean)
About the vid I didn't like it. 1st part had 3 anime shows while the 2nd had only 1, and the transition between the 2 parts was bad. Do I even call it a transition? a black screen is not one.
Edit wise I say your partner needs to slow the zooms down or at least focus more on them since they are too quick it's kind of disturbing. Your part needs better pacing, and in 1:01 you should have duplicated the eye and had 1 layer with low opacity to make it more realistic.