Hey Pam :)
This video is quite interesting for a Berserk AMV. I liked the fact that you made a different approach with the scenery and storyline. The alteration you made were both quite good and also somewhat weird in my opinion.
I like the alternative story and development, even the character development you showed here was quite good and I admired that about the video. However, what I found odd were the technical alterations. For example at the very beginning during the love making scene I found that the appearance of Griffith and the soldiers was not synchronized well with the music, and did not really have any transitioning with the love making scene, and therefore it felt very disconnected in my opinion, it might have been better if the 2 settings and atmospheres did not seem very different. Although you tried fixing that by playing with the colors, and that was quite the good idea! but I still believe that even more could have been done to make it look more natural.
After the love scene I believe you were doing awesome! the battle scene was so good I loved it! and then came the mask, wow! I thought masking with berserk was impossible, I commend you for this!
Until we reach the part where Guts enters the castle. Now again it is only the technical aspect that bothered me a little bit with the scene of Griffith standing next to Zodd. The scene looked weird because of the light coming from Griffith (and his pose as well) compared to the darkness of the setting and the stance of everything else. I believe a different mask of Griffith wouldn't have looked this weird.
The fight begins, quite good again. I really loved the way you moved from this setting to the other Hellish one with that mask, I thought it was amazing! and everything was going so smoothly until it reached the part where you used the accelerated scenes with the different art. This part kind of annoyed me to be honest since it felt like a big filler, and the acceleration didn't look very pretty on the scenes. So I believe something else would have suited that part of the video more, but then again that is just my own opinion on this part.
Once that stage was through you went back to being amazing (Hey i'm saying that a lot.. this vid must be quite amazing xD ) I really loved the way you mixed the skull knight in the fight vs Guts, and also how you made the angel seem like a reincarnation of casca (or at least that's what I think has happened). I liked this different approach. However, the ending of the video was weird because after guts broke free from the demons you showed how he was pinned down again, and at the end he just jumped on the screen and the vid ended, my complaint here is that the video had such a clear story so I really believe it deserved a clear conclusion/ending.
Final thoughts on the video is that its quite creative! Definitely a Berserk video that I will not forget. Good job Pam!