Ok fine you guys win, and I didn't say my stories are any better dave, I am jut trying to give him something to work on from what I could see. And about the Aspect ratio I just thought for an IC this big it would be wise to choose a newer anime source, I guess I was wrong. Don't take what I say so seriously and close to heart. I said the vid was great and these are just things that I thought were the only minor things that I could think of for improvements. I don't get why I say one criticism which nobody agrees with and everybody has a go at me as if I killed somebody, just tell me we don't agree and finished.