Hi ^^
When I first saw this post, I was thinking if I should watch it cause I really don't like the animation of this anime. But then, I saw the line you wrote : "Sometimes love pushes to make crazy gestures." & that made me more interested.
I'm really glad it did because this is a nice piece of work, I liked it even with an obvious dislike of the animation.
Some parts like 0:55 seemed like they weren't really fitting, it killed a bit of my feels for the characters (but that is maybe only me. :) )
But the story was very clear to someone who never watched the anime (At least I hope i got it correctly lol) and that is a very important aspect. I also liked the ending, its as calm and flowy as the beginning was. It's sad that you didn't enter it for the IC, it might have gotten a good ranking. :)
Good luck in your future edits!