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Allegory Stark
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|  Subject: [Allegory Stark] Shinning Like A Diamonds (15/07/2015) ![[Allegory Stark] Shinning Like A Diamonds (15/07/2015) Icon_minitime](https://2img.net/i/fa/icon_minitime.gif) Sat Jul 25, 2015 9:03 am | |
| ![[Allegory Stark] Shinning Like A Diamonds (15/07/2015) Miniat13](https://i.servimg.com/u/f18/19/18/89/74/miniat13.jpg) I introduce my first AMV in this forum. I have some difficulty, because of the lag, so I couldn't take off some mistakes. Please leave a comment. Production:/ Editor:Allegory Stark Anime:One Piece Song:"Diamonds" Our Last Night Dropbox:/s/izwqfjhb85qvnqd/Shining%20Like%20A%20Damonds.mp4?dl=0 Youtube:/watch?v=Q9tE9minebs | |
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Changelling
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| | Subject: Re: [Allegory Stark] Shinning Like A Diamonds (15/07/2015) Sat Jul 25, 2015 10:11 am | |
| That ending though, I kinda wanted more so I only realized the video had stopped when youtube was about to go to another video Lol.
This is good, You are heading towards quite the unique style so I do not know what to say that could help you progress, but for starters I would say that if the very shiny and bright colors were tuned down I'd have a better time watching, and the masks could use less of the white glow (or is that feather maybe) that surrounds them.
Some of the effects were cool though, keep going dude! | |
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ZoroIttoryu
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Location : Greece
| | Subject: Re: [Allegory Stark] Shinning Like A Diamonds (15/07/2015) Sat Jul 25, 2015 12:13 pm | |
| Pretty cool video
Next time try to lower the blur a bit cause it was too strong at some points and also try to experiment more with the texts you are putting throughout the video and like Changelling said the color correction was too bright in many scenes
Good luck with future projects! | |
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Allegory Stark
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| | Subject: Re: [Allegory Stark] Shinning Like A Diamonds (15/07/2015) Sat Jul 25, 2015 4:01 pm | |
| Thank you !
I'm really sad, because I know I can improve it and make it more better. I haven't taken time for the mask. And I should do better masking. At 0:25, I can reduce the smoke and the light. 0:53, we see nothing... 1:06, that changing color make me #nocomment ._. 1:20 I should put a moving flag, do a better mask and make the lyrics visible. I really don't like the color neither. Same at 1:25. Too many defects in a 1:30 AMV. Not my best. | |
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Pieetrr
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InvisibleBlack
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| | Subject: Re: [Allegory Stark] Shinning Like A Diamonds (15/07/2015) Mon Jul 27, 2015 1:16 pm | |
| Interesting style ![[Allegory Stark] Shinning Like A Diamonds (15/07/2015) 1529056811](/users/3215/21/70/10/smiles/1529056811.gif) I can say I really enjoyed it at times but there were times that it seemed a bit rough like at 1.05 with the twitch or the sequence starting at 0.26 where the spinning triangles were moving a bit faster than they should have imo (really nice idea though). The only thing that put me off was the typography. Consider blending it better with the video (same for your fairy tail amv) and maybe change the font? Dunno but something seems wrong with it. Personally I didn't mind the bright cc as One Piece is kinda bright itself. Really nice job overall though, it had many great moments and really good ideas. Good luck with your next project P.S: Do you use newblue plugins for movements? If you do consider doing them manually. Bigger of a hassle but then you dont limit your options on what you can do
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Pieetrr
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InvisibleBlack
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Changelling
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