As I (and others) always tend to tell you, you really need to tone it down a lot with your usage of overlays.
Now aside from that, your work is good, masks, camera, and most of the techniques you apply are high level, but also like a lot of your works, it starts with me asking what am I watching, and ends with me asking what did I just watch.
Translation: It is very random, and you need to have better structure.