Ok lets see
The thing you did in the start with the cc (the colorful thing which i swear i saw in a tut the past couple of months) isnt good for the tone of the amv which is supposed to be dark, no ?
The overlay on 0:46 omagad i thought it was some yt editor from 2009 syncing to screamo and metal aka it is ugly as fuck lol
On 0:12 there are black bars from the twitch gg
Some shakes are still rough maybe its just me, i dont like shakes like those :P (example 1:10 somewhere)
1:03 twixtor game on point : D
Unexpectedly i didnt have much of a problem with most of the overlays except the one with the millions and one black lines
Overall it was a decent video, surely one of your best, which ofc can be better