[Ellines Nakama] Feed the Fire (7/8/2013 - Peter's Birthday)

don't forget Pampouks for uploading it ^^

hawkin and GMJs impressed me with their parts
paxitaras was lazy, you can see it in the part.

on impact of the music, I thought it lacked alot of sync (coming from crookz who doesn't sync :3)
and gabber why u spam air gear no justu :3, not saying its a bad part just u seem to like this anime XD

but overall was nice to watch, but that could be team favourtisim :/ hm

Okay guys so here is my opinion :)
Dan- you did good man. I see improvement on flow and scene selection. Also the mask looked god. What you need to focus on is avoiding crossfades like in 0:22, instead of fading them together you should do a simple zoom, and some very mild blur to smoothen things up. But as I said Good job danny :)
Gab- ohh wait that's me. You tell me :P
Paixtaras- Your part is extremely dark and I could barely see anything. One thing you should avoid is adding dark CC to a clip with a night atmosphere. Bad choice. Also you should focus on your sync and timing. From the way I see it you randomly threw some clips in there and hoped God makes it look good. Place markers on the beats then place your footage and adjust them on your timeline to match the audio. Once that step is done you go through your timeline and add Fx / Camera movements and do the editing basically. good luck
Pampouks- Not gonna say much since the part is actually good + you were in a bad condition when you made it so there is nothing I have that will actually help you.

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Gerge- give more time to your masks. I see the edges are rough and you used feathering to hide that. Resulting in a kind of bad shape for the masks. You won't need much feather if your mask is actually efficient. Ohh and never forget to disable the resample again man it's serious D: Overall I liked your part. Good action and good transitions. Good job :)
Invisibru dude- Me loves you <3 you kickass every time. Only thing I found odd was how you did not make perfect use of the mild beats like at the beginning.
Ntinos: good part. But it was laggy at some points like when Kirito was looking backwards and the cam is zooming out. Not sure if you did something to the frame rate there. Watch out from going extremely bright with your glow at times, and remember to disable the resample.
Ned- Dem comps. Well man 1st you need to focus on picking the right type of footage for your audio. I mean.... senran Kagura o_O ? seriously D: ? and try to create a better border for your clips since this one looks kind of ugly. + a red gradient for the background was not a good choice. Putting that aside. You need better render settings man. Either that or you need to rethink the way you use to get your footage. In any case follow the tutorial pampouks and Invisibru have in the help center, and update your vegas............ 6 was it? get 12 @_@ for good Avi render settings.

Overall this is a good MEP if you ask me. well built transitions and all. With these points above being fixed we'll have a master piece :D


@crookz ye I love Air Gear *^* It's like my signature move since not many people edit Air gear these days :P

Crookz wrote:

on impact of the music, I thought it lacked alot of sync (coming from crookz who doesn't sync :3)

that made my day xD

crookz wrote:

and gabber why u spam air gear no justu :3, not saying its a bad part just u seem to like this anime XD

i noticed that too!

and ntinos (aono) is a SAO addict or he needs a new external-HDD for some new anime

@gab i did but stavros decided to import his version of watermark-hiding techniques in my "no-watermark-hidden" part -_-

Cheers Gab, appreciate the critique and coolios , il have some stuff to work on for our next mep ;)

why stavros parts are so good fu STAVRO if dn@ take you on level up you will be op so i tell him no to do it ;D

Nice MEP everyone  ^^
I agree with what Lacky said.(Gab - for those who dont know I call him Lacky), And also, you can add dark CC to night scene if it fits - for example if you have something shining or a light or something, it actually makes good atmosphere ^^
Liked SAO and Gundam parts esspecially, K part was epic too. And well if I had to choose one thing from this MEP that I really liked, that would be CC, if i had to say something I didnt, its flow because anime were too different in animation. Compare anime from 4th part and SAO . LOL. But well thats not your guys fault xD Maybe you should tell eachother what youre using so animation is not that different.

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Anywayss, good MEP overall ^^ Girlfriend-o-chan aprooves

MissTitannia wrote:

Nice MEP everyone  ^^
I agree with what Lacky said.(Gab - for those who dont know I call him Lacky), And also, you can add dark CC to night scene if it fits - for example if you have something shining or a light or something, it actually makes good atmosphere ^^
Liked SAO and Gundam parts esspecially, K part was epic too. And well if I had to choose one thing from this MEP that I really liked, that would be CC, if i had to say something I didnt, its flow because anime were too different in animation. Compare anime from 4th part and SAO . LOL. But well thats not your guys fault xD Maybe you should tell eachother what youre using so animation is not that different.

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Anywayss, good MEP overall ^^ Girlfriend-o-chan aprooves

Sorry sweety i completely disagree with you XD dark cc at night is a no no, maybe some contrast but for god sake dont add vignette or cold colors X)

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go away sara  

995Gabber wrote:

go away sara

B... B... Buuut I didnt say anything bad  

miss titty you said the worst thing u could of...
glad no1 used dbz  

dbz is the most epic anime to grace this home you call your planet! :3

Crookz wrote:

miss titty you said the worst thing u could of...
glad no1 used dbz  

dbz is the most epic anime to grace this home you call your planet! :3

D:::::::: Dont call me like that -.-  
And LOL I love dbz i watched it when i was like um 7  , but i said that because animation is different than any other anime now (Obvious reasons) :P

I agree, doesn't mix well with todays animation :3 nd miss titty sounds nice xD

First of all,thanks for the dedication,in a birthday that i was on a ship sleeping on the floor for 15 hours this brighten things up a little.

I'd like to that TheGMSJ's part had some really nice transitions but some were still rough,impressed by Hawking on his part,aono's white overlay was somewhat out of place for some moments(experiment with blur,masking and glow to see if you could blend it more) but overall great part.Gab-chan,some scenes lacked the speed others' had,work on your pan.I couldn't see shit on Paixtaras's part.Overall the mep felt pretty smooth,we keep improving.Keep it up.

MissTitannia wrote:

B... B... Buuut I didnt say anything bad  

ohh ya?

Sara wrote:

you can add dark CC to night scene if it fits - for example if you have something shining or a light or something, it actually makes good atmosphere ^^

U so stupid OMG. It's either dark or Shining / lights. Can't be both

and i'm nowhere? no words huh? interesting

your body is still paralyzed. Tis but a dream

Didnt say anything about dan or invisibru,stop whining

Ohh my part was the beginning of the action bits so I believe it's normal to be slower, but sure I can go faster (here hold my beer), and this part is old so my panning has improved by now :) I'll make you proud mastah!

995Gabber wrote:

Ohh my part was the beginning of the action bits so I believe it's normal to be slower, but sure I can go faster (here hold my beer), and this part is old so my panning has improved by now :) I'll make you proud mastah!

 lol.

Nice mep guys.
(Gundam  )