Enjoyed it but still a ways to go.
Namely you need improvement on everything related on panning,those zoom ins you do are bad,usually because they are too fast while the next scene zooms in too slowly or not at all or due to the fact that the next scene is not tilted correctly or doenst match the zoom in at all.I would suggest that i should give you a few tips and exercise a bit but i can't currently,maybe one of the other members can...(?)
Moreover you could have coloured it red in a better way,experiment with new channels,effects,masking methods.(all of these help in colouring if used in a certain way.)